Goats in the garden and Marx

Oct 25 2007  | Views 818 |  Comments  (9)
Short story, part of Rourkela tales... Expand

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  Srinivas Vijayaraghavan posted 9 mnths ago

Thanks Brenny. Your comments are most thoughtful. SV



  ashualec posted 9 mnths ago

very well written 



  Brenny posted 10 mnths ago

Hi Srinivas,
First visit to your blog and a thoroughly enjoyable one.
 
I loved both the care you took to describe the garden that Roy Babu had so carefully taken years to put together, going conscientiously from shrub to shrub, tree to tree.
 
The tie in of the goats was effortless, the portrayal of the cripple endearing and heartwarming, and the interaction between Roy Babu and Ramu just absolutely hilarious.
 
When I write my stories I find it difficult to paint a picture or set the landscape and am very impressed with how you achieved it.
 
As for the Socialist old man who lives for his kids, it is a sobering message and a reminder that much is happening outside our walls while we each tend to our own personal gardens, whatever form they may take.
 
A great read.  Well worthy of being featured.



  Srinivas Vijayaraghavan posted 10 mnths ago

Thanks folks.



  deepaprakasa posted 10 mnths ago

hahhaahhaaa i like it...roti takes precedence....what dr a a alder did in his thesis you have done so effortlessly.....



  maria_m posted 10 mnths ago

This story was excellent... Worthy of a blogprint. :-) Or do you have one already?
 
I liked the flow and the character development of Roy...
 
Thanks,
Maria M



  swarajya posted 10 mnths ago

I found a smooth flow in the story.As it was about a garden and the menace of a goat , it was all the more engrossing.It is difficult to maintain a garden when the cattle are allowed to graze freely in other man's land.Jokingly a professor had told in his lecture that we worship cow because of its high productivity.Output  milk comes out of Input -other man's grass .So productivity ie Output(X)  divided by Input (0)is Infinity.
The story has been written excellently well.Wish you all the best.



  seeingeye posted 10 mnths ago

Hi srinivas, my first visit to your blog. Lovely warm story. cant help feeling the old cripple was one clever cookie, native intelligence or what? loved the nalayak too!



  maddss123 posted 10 mnths ago

Dear Srinivas
 
 
That was a lovely story of human relationship....and feelings,the story of the old man gets repeated the cause can be draught,  a marriage at home......or division of land in the family.......
 
I think  a slight economy of words would do, still the story is outstanding.
 
 
Regards





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